TNG Movie Plot Generator

The Motion Picture t/m Nemesis

Moderator: Dark*staR

Gesloten
Gebruikersavatar
3rd RemataKlan
Vice Admiral
Vice Admiral
Berichten: 9931
Lid geworden op: 02 jun 2002, 14:04

TNG Movie Plot Generator

Bericht door 3rd RemataKlan »

Maak je eigen TNG film met de Star Trek The Next Generation Movie Plot Generator

Vergeet niet je 'screenplay' te posten. :)
Gebruikersavatar
Tactical_Cube
Vice Admiral
Vice Admiral
Berichten: 8488
Lid geworden op: 20 apr 2004, 20:41
Locatie: Harlingen

Bericht door Tactical_Cube »

kzal et zo effe doen :P kmoet nu eten kwas net bezig
Gebruikersavatar
Blind Guardian
Fleet Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Berichten: 18796
Lid geworden op: 23 jun 2002, 21:14
Locatie: Postbus
Contacteer:

Bericht door Blind Guardian »

Star Trek:Data Reborn

Written By:Niels van Lieshout
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see data one year dead remember day . This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are sober about the dead of data. During this scene, Picard complains about janeway as admiral .

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must Pleur Op Prime. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data returns from the dead.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving wesley crusher's funeral ! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that data is resurrected by his evil twin brother lore , and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to wesley, janeway, lore, neelix , though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Lore, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Lore is not REALLY that bad, because this villian loves his brother .

The crew then learns that Pleur Op Prime is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'paranoid android .' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf is drunk . This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, explains she is a alcoholic .

A little later, Picard is headbanging . The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the sea. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, The Search for Lore (wrath of khan). This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'you fucking, bastard !!!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Lore has a Pleur Op Destruction Device! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'mwhaahahahahah!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Lore, Data and Lore melted Together . This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Lore.

Soon, Riker shoots at Wesley Crusher . But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Xzorbia Borralia Folmmalia Nebula . Almost defeated, Lore, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Pleur Op Destruction Device! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Lore by Lore. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Captain Archer saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with janeway as admiral . Picard then gives a speech about berman being a asshole .

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END
Gebruikersavatar
Ace of Spades
Fleet Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Berichten: 17638
Lid geworden op: 29 mei 2004, 10:28
Locatie: Prachtig Dellûf

Bericht door Ace of Spades »

Star Trek:The Revenge of Wesley

Written By:Ace of Spades

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see a message from Wesley. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are having a cocktailparty. During this scene, Picard complains about Wesley.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must save an adrift spaceship. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data vanishes into nothing.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving raiding Nausiicans! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that he is actually a woman, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Tim Allen, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Wesley, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Wesley is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is really a familyman.

The crew then learns that Vulcan is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Dromen zijn bedrog.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf is beaten by Wesley with a Bath L'eth fight. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, is walking naked into the Mess Hall.

A little later, Picard dances in a tutu. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the Villa with the Wirhl Pool. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Wesley creates a new planet. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'You donkeyfucking unclefucker!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Wesley has a Radar-detector-detector! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'To be, or not to be!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Wesley, the Enterprise has a spacebattle with four Bird of Preys. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Wesley.

Soon, Riker shoots at The Caretaker. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called the Archer-Nebula. Almost defeated, Wesley, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Radar-detector-detector! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Wesley by firing a laser :p. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily the reapearing Data saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with Wesley. Picard then gives a speech about the taste of poop.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.

THE END

(prachtig tog?)
Gebruikersavatar
Blind Guardian
Fleet Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Berichten: 18796
Lid geworden op: 23 jun 2002, 21:14
Locatie: Postbus
Contacteer:

Bericht door Blind Guardian »

wat zijn we allemaal wesley vredelievend :Y)
Gebruikersavatar
Guess who?
Admiral
Admiral
Berichten: 13287
Lid geworden op: 12 apr 2004, 16:42
Locatie: Delft
Contacteer:

Bericht door Guess who? »

Tis wel een lange lijst geworden, maar heb de enters tussendoor weggehaald
--------------------

Star Trek:The Real Story Continues

Written By:Erik
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.
After the credits, we see Picard dieing. This confuses the audience to no end.
Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are having dinner because of Data's birthday. During this scene, Picard complains about losing Data.
There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must investigate a planet. Thus, beginning their mission.
When they arrive at this mission, Data eats a chicken but realises he can't digest it.
This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving A meeting with the local inhabitants! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.
Later on, Picard finally finds out that That Varek has poisoned all inhabitants, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.
As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Tuvok, though this person doesn't really help anything.
Then, Varek, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Varek is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is an emotional Vulcan.
The crew then learns that Ventox is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!
While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'the dutch national anthem.' The audience groans.
A little later, Worf wakes up from a dream at the bridge in his pyama's. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.
Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, wakes up next to the Warpcore in engineering.
A little later, Data and Picard eat the green poison, in a funny mood, used to poison the inhabitants of Ventox. The audience doesn't laugh, however.
Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the deep blue sea. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.
Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.
Soon, Picard swims to two goats swimming in the sea and performs a mindmeld them to listen if they are posioned. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...
Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Oh dear!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.
Finally, the crew discovers that Varek has a Poisonspreadingthingy! This makes the situation very dangerous!
In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'Oh no!!' ...even though this makes no sense.
In their attempts to stop Varek, Enterprise fires all the Torpedo's it has on the planet. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Varek.
Soon, Riker shoots at Picard. But this doesn't help anything.
There is a final showdown in a nebula called Voila-et-sont-mort. Almost defeated, Varek, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Poisonspreadingthingy! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.
Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Varek by Spitting in his eye. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily A poisoned inhabitant saves Picard at the last moment.
Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with losing Data. Picard then gives a speech about Deep-fryed chickens which can let the poison taste good.
The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.
The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.
THE END


Zeu
Gebruikersavatar
Blind Guardian
Fleet Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Berichten: 18796
Lid geworden op: 23 jun 2002, 21:14
Locatie: Postbus
Contacteer:

Bericht door Blind Guardian »

Star Trek:The Return of the Wrath of Khan

Written By:Vladimir Harkonnen
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see Steward and Beman having a fight . This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are laughing about the old low sfx movie. During this scene, Picard complains about the last four star trek movies .

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must ceti alpha star system . Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data is gone with the wind .

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving berman and braga arguing about the plot! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that Khan is ressurected by Berman and is pissed, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Rick Berman, Brannon Barga, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Khan ofcourse what else , the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Khan ofcourse what else is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is annoyed by the resurrection .

The crew then learns that the universe is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'nothing .' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf is fired by Rick Berman. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, is also fired by Rick Berman .

A little later, Data returns . The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the boils of hell . Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, going to ceti alpha system. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'go f*ck you're self you're f*cking annoying, Berman I really hate you !' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Khan ofcourse what else has a Berman Burniator ! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'He is a evil genetic monster, but I am more worse!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Khan ofcourse what else , The Berman and Braga Burniator Explodes, and Berman vanish in time and space . This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Khan ofcourse what else .

Soon, Riker shoots at Berman . But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Anti Berman Nebula . Almost defeated, Khan ofcourse what else , in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Berman Burniator ! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Khan ofcourse what else by letting bher deleting Khan Noonian Singh from the script . Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Ira Behr saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with the last four star trek movies . Picard then gives a speech about the evils of Berman and Braga .

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Congratulations!
You have now written a Next Generation movie
that's just as good as the ones shown at theaters!
Print this movie out and send it to Rick Berman!
Gebruikersavatar
Tactical_Cube
Vice Admiral
Vice Admiral
Berichten: 8488
Lid geworden op: 20 apr 2004, 20:41
Locatie: Harlingen

Bericht door Tactical_Cube »

nou ja bij mij doet ie het dus niet hij wil em niet generaten en khad net zon leuke :P
Gebruikersavatar
Tactical_Cube
Vice Admiral
Vice Admiral
Berichten: 8488
Lid geworden op: 20 apr 2004, 20:41
Locatie: Harlingen

Bericht door Tactical_Cube »

ook hier vind ik dat die gasten wel erg tegen star trek waren zou erg waren de films van tng nou ook weer niet en ik zie die liever dan tos (films)
Gebruikersavatar
Jadzia
Commander
Commander
Berichten: 1895
Lid geworden op: 10 jun 2002, 23:52
Locatie: Nuland

Bericht door Jadzia »

Star Trek:Plothole

Written By:Jadzia

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see no audience, because it has left crying. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are wondering what they are doing here. During this scene, Picard complains about not having hair.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must buy a new toothbrush. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data eats Goofy.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving tribbles! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that he is his own father, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Gene Roddenberry, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Brannon Braga, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Brannon Braga is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is actually Picard.

The crew then learns that Disney World is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Klein Klein Kleutertje.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf falls over and cannot get up. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, has a bath, gets drunk, hallucinates and crashes the Enterprise.

A little later, Picard borrows Janeway's wig. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the Keukenhof. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Dr. Crusher paints HMS Bounty on the Enterprise. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'oopsidaisy!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Brannon Braga has a plot killer! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'Oh no! I've lost my lines!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Brannon Braga, the universe implodes. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Brannon Braga.

Soon, Riker shoots at himself. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called the "there's coffee in that"-nebula. Almost defeated, Brannon Braga, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his plot killer! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Brannon Braga by reading him the script to this movie. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily a Pakled saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with not having hair. Picard then gives a speech about giant squids.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.

THE END
Gebruikersavatar
Dr Soong
Cadet 3rd Class
Cadet 3rd Class
Berichten: 62
Lid geworden op: 24 jul 2003, 15:41
Locatie: Assen

Bericht door Dr Soong »

Star Trek:Naked Phaser

Written By:Frank Drebin

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see a dancing Picard. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are fucking arround. During this scene, Picard complains about he's not invited to the orgy.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must rescue the galaxy. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data is building a church.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a soccer game against Klingon warriors! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that Klingons want to conquer Risa, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Sisko, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Petoing, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Petoing is not REALLY that bad, because this villian only wants fun.

The crew then learns that Risa is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'i'm singin in the rain.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf can't play soccer. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, fight with Riker.

A little later, Beverly let grow hair on Picards head. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the sea. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, the invention of plexiglas. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Damn!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Petoing has a walking coffee machine! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'elk nadeel heb z'n voordeel!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Petoing, Enterprise destroys 4 Romulan en 7 Klingon warships. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Petoing.

Soon, Riker shoots at Worf. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Archers fog. Almost defeated, Petoing, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his walking coffee machine! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Petoing by beam him into space. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily a stranger saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with he's not invited to the orgy. Picard then gives a speech about the Future.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.
Gebruikersavatar
KillaH
Ensign
Ensign
Berichten: 195
Lid geworden op: 07 jul 2004, 19:14
Locatie: Meppel

Bericht door KillaH »

damn mislukt
Gebruikersavatar
Mr Hayes
Fleet Captain
Fleet Captain
Berichten: 3691
Lid geworden op: 11 jun 2002, 12:54
Locatie: Barcelona
Contacteer:

Bericht door Mr Hayes »

Star Trek:Omega Directive

Written By:Gert
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see the planet Bajor. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are on Bajor to watch the Bajorans signing the federation charter. During this scene, Picard complains about being a bachelor forever.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must investigate the sudden loss of four starships who also were on Bajor . Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data is intrigued by Seven of Nine.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving battle with a Cardssian ship! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that a new faction of Cardassians and humans want to destroy large parts of space with the Omega molecule, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Ezri Dax, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Gul Falkot, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Gul Falkot is not REALLY that bad, because this villian The bad guy doesn't want Bajor to be in the federation.

The crew then learns that Namos IV is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'The Liquidator.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf because he lost in a holodeck fight from Torres. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, questions Ezri's capabilities as counselor.

A little later, Picard is getting drunk. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the Fjords, Norway. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Seeing the Golden Gate Bridge again. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Stupid woman!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Gul Falkot has a Omega Molecule weapon! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'The Federation is not the new Borg collective!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Gul Falkot, The USS Voyager is being destroyed. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Gul Falkot.

Soon, Riker shoots at Riker arives with the USS Titan, and we can see him on the viewscreen of the Enterprise. He is helping with the fight. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Kahuna particle fountain. Almost defeated, Gul Falkot, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Omega Molecule weapon! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Gul Falkot by Gul Falkot and Eric Carter are becoming mad and they are killing themselves. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Janeway saves Picard saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with being a bachelor forever. Picard then gives a speech about Picard speeches about the advantages of the federation.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END
Visitor1982
Commander
Commander
Berichten: 1674
Lid geworden op: 06 jul 2003, 18:20

Bericht door Visitor1982 »

Star Trek:Prime Directive

Written By:Visitor1982
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see Klingons and Romulans secretly creating an alliance. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are no longer together. During this scene, Picard complains about having Dr. Pulaski back.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must a plant with an Iconian gateway. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data is dead.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a near warpcore breach! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that the Iconian gateway is in control by the new Romulan/Klingon alliance, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Dr. Crusher, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Dreshko Rubinstein, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Dreshko Rubinstein is not REALLY that bad, because this villian isn't alone.

The crew then learns that Mipassu is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'nothing.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf becomes a badguy. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, dies.

A little later, Pulaski fights with Picard. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the Paramount backlot. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, the cloaked bird of prey from The Undiscovered Country. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Mamma Mia!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Dreshko Rubinstein has a Iconian Gateway! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'You don't have to quote the rulebook!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Dreshko Rubinstein, the Enterprise-E blows up. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Dreshko Rubinstein.

Soon, Riker shoots at Worf. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called the death toll. Almost defeated, Dreshko Rubinstein, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Iconian Gateway! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Dreshko Rubinstein by putting him in the Iconian Gateway and blowing the gateway up at the same time. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Pulaski saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with having Dr. Pulaski back. Picard then gives a speech about Dr. Crusher.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END
Gebruikersavatar
Nemesis
Admiral
Admiral
Berichten: 11595
Lid geworden op: 10 jun 2002, 20:40
Locatie: Zwolle
Contacteer:

Bericht door Nemesis »

Star Trek:Exploration

Written By:van Mierlo
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see a shuttle race trough the solar system. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are visiting riker on his ship. During this scene, Picard complains about data, who is dead.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must save a dying planet. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data reincarnated as goofy.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a freefall with starfleet parachutes! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that the planet isn't dying, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to captain archer, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Palko, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Palko is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is lonely.

The crew then learns that Risa is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'always look at the bright side of life.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf has to dance. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, forgot to open the parachute.

A little later, dr. crusher farts. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the ocean. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, troi falls out of the sky . This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Cheater!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Palko has a planet killer! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'Don't worry, be happy!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Palko, The enterprise chases palko's ship through the quadrant. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Palko.

Soon, Riker shoots at Palko. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called The O-zone. Almost defeated, Palko, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his planet killer! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Palko by push him out of an airlock. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Laforge saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with data, who is dead. Picard then gives a speech about the purpose of life.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END
Gebruikersavatar
Section31
Moderator
Moderator
Berichten: 7164
Lid geworden op: 02 jun 2002, 01:03

Bericht door Section31 »

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see the earth exploding. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are remembering the destruction of earth. During this scene, Picard complains about the short skirts that the new uniforms introduced.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must recover Earth. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data can no longer hides his sexuel attraction to Captain Picard.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a battle with Cardassians! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that the Cardassians are responsible for the destruction of Earth, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Bob Saget, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, T'alon, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But T'alon is not REALLY that bad, because this villian never got enough attention from his farther and mother.

The crew then learns that Earth is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Ik heb een potje met vet.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf has gained a few pounds. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, has an erotic love sequence with Commander Riker.

A little later, Data shaves his pubic hair. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the desert of Cardassia. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, The fight between the Enterprise and the dildo shaped Cardassian destruction ship. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Fucking Gipsy!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that T'alon has a dildo shaped Cardassian destruction ship! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'It was my home!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop T'alon, The Enterprise destroys the dildo shaped Cardassian destruction ship. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop T'alon.

Soon, Riker shoots at his own crew. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Haldoran Parren. Almost defeated, T'alon, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his dildo shaped Cardassian destruction ship! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills T'alon by blowing up his dildo shaped Cardassian destruction ship. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Beverly Crusher saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with the short skirts that the new uniforms introduced. Picard then gives a speech about the meaning of life.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END :)
Gebruikersavatar
Nebulaguy
Vice Admiral
Vice Admiral
Berichten: 8152
Lid geworden op: 13 jul 2003, 21:19
Locatie: Gent

Bericht door Nebulaguy »

:lol: Moet zowat het meest onwaarschijnlijke verhaal zijn dat ik hier al gezien heb.
Gebruikersavatar
SCC Dauntless
Commander
Commander
Berichten: 1416
Lid geworden op: 16 jun 2004, 17:38
Locatie: Hoofddorp
Contacteer:

Bericht door SCC Dauntless »

Star Trek:the return

Written By:van Leeuwen
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see Lore and Data. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are in the messhall, talking about Data. During this scene, Picard complains about B4.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must the FIS where Lore and Data are. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data is reprogramd.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a race with a speedboot! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that Lore wants to be deäctived, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Admiral Damman, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Lore, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Lore is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is treated badly in the past.

The crew then learns that Data is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Boerenlul.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf is still on the enterprise when the action begins. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, has a baby.

A little later, Riker and Picard get drunk. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the snow. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Geordi say's the need of the ..... . This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Shut up!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Lore has a Genesis Torpedo! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'All together now!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Lore, the enterprise and the voyager crash. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Lore.

Soon, Riker shoots at Lore. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called FIS ALPINE RIF. Almost defeated, Lore, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Genesis Torpedo! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Lore by a phaser. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily the SCC Dauntless with Admiral van Leeuwen on board saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with B4. Picard then gives a speech about Life.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Congratulations!
You have now written a Next Generation movie
that's just as good as the ones shown at theaters!
Print this movie out and send it to Rick Berman!
Gebruikersavatar
Galenfuinion
Fleet Captain
Fleet Captain
Berichten: 3119
Lid geworden op: 01 okt 2002, 14:12
Locatie: Bergen op Zoom
Contacteer:

Bericht door Galenfuinion »

Star Trek:Final Mission

Written By:Roberto
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see an attack on Earth. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are at the funeral of Wesley Crusher. During this scene, Picard complains about losing a son.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must the Neutral Zone to inspect a damaged outpost. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data (B4-version) explores his abilities.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving an attack by the Romulans! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that Romulans are assimilated by the Borg, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Bashir & Kira, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Dragon, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Dragon is not REALLY that bad, because this villian thinks resistance is futile.

The crew then learns that Earth is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Dragostea Din Tei.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf is being tackled by an assimilated Romulan. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, kisses Riker.

A little later, Picard kisses Crusher. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the the ocean. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, someting happens. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says ''Shit!'!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Dragon has a assimilator! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'Resistance is what keeps us alive!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Dragon, a Borg cube is being attacked by Klingons. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Dragon.

Soon, Riker shoots at Hugh. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called The Blaza. Almost defeated, Dragon, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his assimilator! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Dragon by blowing them up. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Hugh saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with losing a son. Picard then gives a speech about resistance in the past.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.
Gebruikersavatar
martine
Captain
Captain
Berichten: 2177
Lid geworden op: 21 jul 2002, 14:22
Locatie: Londen UK

Bericht door martine »

lachen man, ok. dit is die van mij.


The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see janeway die horribly. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are doing a wooden shoe dance. During this scene, Picard complains about being bald.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must stop wesley of becoming a ballerina. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data dresses up in a tutu and starts to dance.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a hunt for spot on foot! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that data's cat spot is actually an evil mastermind whose name is tovar and wants to take over the universe , and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to jeri ryan, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, tovar, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But tovar is not REALLY that bad, because this villian has fleas and they really itch.

The crew then learns that cat a tunga is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'row, row, row your boat.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf had to dress up in a pink tutu as well. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, is watching a soap opera.

A little later, riker dresses up in a pink tutu. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the sea. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, the crew will search for the ancient cat god. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'holy moly picardman!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that tovar has a huge pink tutu cloning device! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'i've got fleas!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop tovar, the ship of tovarl will flie up picard's @ss. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop tovar.

Soon, Riker shoots at tovar. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called tutupinkia. Almost defeated, tovar, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his huge pink tutu cloning device! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills tovar by running him over in a futuristic buggy (roadkill). Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily beverly crusher saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with being bald. Picard then gives a speech about fleas and how they can be a terrible thing (hence his bald head).

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Congratulations!
You have now written a Next Generation movie
that's just as good as the ones shown at theaters!
Print this movie out and send it to Rick Berman!
Gebruikersavatar
SuperVlaai
Commodore
Commodore
Berichten: 4525
Lid geworden op: 29 feb 2004, 23:36
Locatie: Belg
Contacteer:

Bericht door SuperVlaai »

Lijkt intersant wil het wel doen maar geen zin in sorry.
Gebruikersavatar
Dark*staR
Administrator
Administrator
Berichten: 5700
Lid geworden op: 11 jun 2002, 10:49
Locatie: Fryslân
Contacteer:

Bericht door Dark*staR »

Star Trek:First Generection

Written By:Dark*staR
The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see an old NS train floating in space. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are sleeping. During this scene, Picard complains about sleeping alone.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must kill all humans that are dead. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data dreams that he is going to do a triple flip flop on Picards head.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving fighting sheep! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that that Troi can cook a great chickensoup, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to mevrouw P., though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Slechte Man, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Slechte Man is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is a good guy with a mothercomplex.

The crew then learns that Fishbowlcity is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Hi Hi Ha Ha allemaal aan de enema.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf has to take the sheep to the cows. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, goes nananananana.

A little later, Papa Smurf goes bad on Rikers ass. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the swimmingpool. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Spock gets killed. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Kiekeboehoeeeee!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Slechte Man has a strange device! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'Spongebob!!!!!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Slechte Man, humans burn and freeze at the same time. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Slechte Man.

Soon, Riker shoots at Riker. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called Earl Grey. Almost defeated, Slechte Man, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his strange device! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Slechte Man by driving over him with a tank. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Boes saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with sleeping alone. Picard then gives a speech about coca cola.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.


THE END
Gebruikersavatar
22339
Captain
Captain
Berichten: 2867
Lid geworden op: 11 jun 2002, 10:49
Locatie: Westland
Contacteer:

Bericht door 22339 »

Star Trek:Retaliation

Written By:22339

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see a huge Dominion armada entering the Bajoran
Wormhole. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors
are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG
crew. They are on the hollo-deck, playing beach volley. During this scene, Picard complains about having sun burns.

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the
TNG crew must go to DS9 to answer a distress call. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data recieves a strange transmission and
deactivates.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving a heavy damaged Defiant,
running for 3 Jem'Hadar fighters! This scene could have been very
action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that the Dominion is back, and ready to
kick some Federation ass, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks
to Kira, though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, Founder, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Founder is not
REALLY that bad, because this villian got kicked out of the great link.

The crew then learns that Bajor is in grave danger! They must come to the
rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'Klingon Opera.' The
audience groans.

A little later, Worf got a black eye for fighting hand to hand with a
Jem'Hadar. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, is giving birth to
Riker's child.

A little later, Quark gets drunk. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the rain
forrest on Bajor. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Riker comes to the rescue with his ship. This seems verrrry familiar
to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'come get me!' Nerds in the
audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that Founder has a Dominion mind converter!
This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'There is no way back!'
...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop Founder, a Dominion battle-cruiser crashes into
DS9. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Founder.

Soon, Riker shoots at Jem'hadar. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called The Sanios Nebula. Almost
defeated, Founder, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his Dominion mind
converter! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop
him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Founder by injecting a
new section 31 virus. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily
Odo saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this
mission, Picard has resolved his problems with having sun burns. Picard then
gives a speech about how important friends and allies are.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.

THE END


Congratulations!
You have now written a Next Generation movie
that's just as good as the ones shown at theaters!
Print this movie out and send it to Rick Berman!
Triple Z
Cadet 1st Class
Cadet 1st Class
Berichten: 4
Lid geworden op: 12 aug 2004, 17:36

Bericht door Triple Z »

Star Trek:unexpected enemies

Written By:Triple Z

The film opens with some credits that make the audience's eyes hurt.

After the credits, we see T'Pol attacking the moon with the vulcan cruiser Na'kuwl. This confuses the audience to no end.

Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. On the Enterprise, we see the TNG crew. They are Playing ping-pong on the deflector dish. During this scene, Picard complains about having lost 3 ping-pong matches in a row to O'Brian..

There is an incoming hail, where Picard is instructed that Picard and the TNG crew must contact to Na'kewl and ask why it is attacking the moon. Thus, beginning their mission.

When they arrive at this mission, Data instals a sport chip and refuses to stop paying basketball on the bridge.

This scene abruptly switches to a scene involving the enterprise flying into the Na'kewl due to unexplanable engine problems! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately.

Later on, Picard finally finds out that T'Pol has injected herezelf with trellium D and time traveled to the current year to attack to moon for no reason at all, and thus the plot of the film finally begins.

As the crew work toward resolving this plot, a member of the TNG crew talks to Riker as he starts smoking and ends up in sickbay with longcancer., though this person doesn't really help anything.

Then, T'Pol, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But T'Pol is not REALLY that bad, because this villian is a woman.

The crew then learns that the moon is in grave danger! They must come to the rescue!

While they are working on this rescue, Data sings 'the national vulcan anthem.' The audience groans.

A little later, Worf was forced to play waterpolo with captain archer who followed T'Pol through time and secretly transported himself to enterprise. This ticks off many Worf fans in the audience.

Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, finds T'Pol in control of her body and is transported to the Na'kewl to be T'Pol's slave.

A little later, Trio, T'Pol and archer beam down to earth and start mud wrestling with Harry kim. The audience doesn't laugh, however.

Trying to resolve things, Picard and his Away Team beam down to the lagerst city on the moon. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite.

Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.

Soon, Beverly finds worf and T'Pol stuck in the transporter buffer. This seems verrrry familiar to the audience, for some reason...

Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'ooh, seasnakes!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy.

Finally, the crew discovers that T'Pol has a sub space remote control! This makes the situation very dangerous!

In reaction to this, one of the crewmembers says 'sir, scans show that youa re the worst ping-pong player onboard!' ...even though this makes no sense.

In their attempts to stop T'Pol, data transports to the Na'kewl. onboard data starts playing baseball to distract T'Polfrom destroying the moon. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop T'Pol.

Soon, Riker shoots at archer. But this doesn't help anything.

There is a final showdown in a nebula called the marsian nebula. Almost defeated, T'Pol, in a fit of rage, attempts to activate his sub space remote control! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him.

Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills T'Pol by cutting her head off with a plasma torch. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Archer saves Picard at the last moment.

Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with having lost 3 ping-pong matches in a row to O'Brian.. Picard then gives a speech about a ban of playing ping-pong on the enterprise cause of safety reasons.

The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space.

The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.

THE END



------------------------------------------------------------

klopt hier en daar niet en er zitten wat spelfouten in maar daar moet je maar niet op letter :D
Gesloten